Exploring what is the metric of success? Poems that can guide us.
Gorgeous. No wasted words.
"wasted words" is the wrong phrase, but it feels like it has all the words it needs and is rich and spare at the same time.
I get you. And thank you.
I’ve been working on shortening my lines at the same time as sometimes lengthening them too. Never like to make my life easy.
You're just keeping it interesting ;).
That’s a better way to phrase it than my ‘I’m being contrary’.
😁
Gorgeous. No wasted words.
"wasted words" is the wrong phrase, but it feels like it has all the words it needs and is rich and spare at the same time.
I get you. And thank you.
I’ve been working on shortening my lines at the same time as sometimes lengthening them too. Never like to make my life easy.
You're just keeping it interesting ;).
That’s a better way to phrase it than my ‘I’m being contrary’.
😁