These are incredible. Your use of white space makes the poems so visceral, so tangible--you just did it so beautifully paired with your words, I love these.
Oh I always love how you describe the story behind the writing and the humour that o o o o z e s from it all 🤍. “I think it hit the brief well; crease and all.” 😆. And I totally agree. Lovely x
Thank yooooooooohooooooo. I had to embrace that crease, printer is upstairs and I was down, I’d already printed it out 4 times and just could not stand another trek up our stairs.
Oh they so very much fit the brief. Another to show my kids later in a bid to demonstrate how fun and interesting poetry can be when you play with the page. Thank you. (I def didn’t do a small lol at the curtain rail story) x
Poems are already vital, pumping full of life and meaning within its words. But this, to add these spaces and contort the formatting is just beautiful; the poem becomes more alive, more real, as if it embodies its meaning. Just lovely work!
These are incredible. Your use of white space makes the poems so visceral, so tangible--you just did it so beautifully paired with your words, I love these.
You are very kind
Tamsin these are magic 🤩 so creative and wonderful. I did breathe. I did slow down. Thank you 🙏🏼
Welcome ☺️
Oh I always love how you describe the story behind the writing and the humour that o o o o z e s from it all 🤍. “I think it hit the brief well; crease and all.” 😆. And I totally agree. Lovely x
Thank yooooooooohooooooo. I had to embrace that crease, printer is upstairs and I was down, I’d already printed it out 4 times and just could not stand another trek up our stairs.
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These are great!! X
Thank you
Oh they so very much fit the brief. Another to show my kids later in a bid to demonstrate how fun and interesting poetry can be when you play with the page. Thank you. (I def didn’t do a small lol at the curtain rail story) x
(They are up, a little wonky, but don’t tell him I said so. He did a good enough job. )
This kind of poetry is def one of my favourites
Poems are already vital, pumping full of life and meaning within its words. But this, to add these spaces and contort the formatting is just beautiful; the poem becomes more alive, more real, as if it embodies its meaning. Just lovely work!
Thank you so much