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‘Can you see

Will you see’

Love these two lines together. Thanks for taking me on the process with a lovely frank honesty 🙏

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You are welcome. Thank you for commenting it’s great to get feedback.

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Apr 2Liked by Tamsin Chennell

heard in nature

hours I wait

for visiting words

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Very nice

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Apr 1Liked by Tamsin Chennell

The first one was made in jest, yet it still has a musicality to it; it is very nice to read. But, the second one is my favorite. You chose your words well to describe those flitting and light emotions that come with flirting.

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Thank you

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